6/10/2023 0 Comments Moon chosen bookI had a little trouble suspending disbelief with the setting as well, but not so much that I couldn't get into the characters.Ĭharacter development was done well for the very short time we got to know the side characters, and the main character without a doubt was a very brave, indomitable, and moral woman, shown in several instances which I appreciated. So I feel the introduction was too abrupt. I try to never just bash anyone or belittle anything creative they've done.įor the very beginning I'm going to use the hero's journey in my critique - I felt like the author skipped the ordinary world entirely and started right in the middle of reluctance - there was a moment within it when she did briefly think about her job, but for me it wasn't enough. If the author should read this I hope they find it a useful critique. Mixed feelings here, I have positives and negatives to say.
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